Need your opinion on my college POEM?

sounds like you are saying you like fashion your sister dosent, shes working hard, your not and for some reason that makes you mad and you need to ruin her pile of leaves?............yes i think you should change it...........it needs to be more literature like if its not going to rhyme at all and like i said it seems your just saying....you are fashionable and she is not..............oh also after the line "seems to come naturally to my sister" thats where it goes bad before that it seems like your going somewhere...but its very anticlimatic and not much feeling, becuase like i said i cant really see the point?........................well its kinda funny i guess if your just talking about how ur sisters a pain haha, idk.